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Tuesday 15 November 2016

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The Lost Three Girls

It was a beautiful day and a group of friends were getting ready for a night of their lives. The group of friends were Victoria, Cecillia and Ana. They were so excited to go camping. They got all their gears ready and packed for the most exciting night of the evening. Victoria, Cecillia and Ana were looking for some sticks and rocks for their nice burning flames. Once they collected their sticks and rocks they made a huge flaming fire to cook their delicious s'mores. The group of friends were tired as a slow koala climbing a tree up very high, so they rested until morning light.

Next day…..
The girls woke up and saw that there was a huge fire going on in the big trees. They couldn’t believe their eyes, so they panicked in fear. The group were frozen like a statue, their hearts were racing like a racing car and their hands were shaking wild.
Victoria yelled “Help! Help!”
Cecillia and Ana didn’t have their phones or anything on them. The friends were in quick fear. They couldn’t think of any plan, so they were in big disaster. Victoria was stuck on the other side with the girls towards the forest, Suddenly Victoria herd the bushed rattle very loudly.
“Cecillia, Ana!!!!”  murmured Victoria.

A few hours later...
Victoria panicked until she see’s a helicopter seeking for help. But as soon as they could reach out for her to bring her to safety, Victoria was mysteriously shoved by a creature and fell in the huge waves.
“AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!” Victoria screamed as loud as a lion’s growl. When she then saw Ana and Cecillia were trapped in the forest until suddenly trees falling bit by bit, no one could see or hear them until Ana had an idea to grab sticks and chuck it at the helicopter.

For writing we were writing a recount but it was a very interesting way. I was working with Victoria and Cecillia. To start our writing we had to make a plan but it have t be past tense. When we started our writing we have to sit back to back and we also weren't allowed to talk or look at each other's screens. Our writing We were only allowed to write a sentence each like for example: I would write a sentence then Victoria would write another until it gets to Cecillia. Then you keep it going.

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