DRAFT - Stretched Sentence

L.I: To write a stretched sentence.

Who: The bird sang.

What: The bird sang fluently

When: As the sun rose behind the snowy mountain, The bird sang fluently,

                    

Where: As the sun rose behind the snowy mountain, The bird sang fluently on a long tree branch,

Why:As the sun rose behind the snowy mountain, the bird sang fluently on a long tree branch to wake up the birds. BEFORE

L.I: To use DRAFT to check our sentences.

Why: As the sun rose behind the snowy mountain, the bird sang fluently on a long tree branch to wake up the other birds.

                          to awaken the birds, yet they were a mile away. AFTER

Mahdia and I worked on sentence which we had to stretch out using the 5 W's, AAWWWUBBIS ,DRAFT and FANBOYS.  After we wrote our stretched sentence we had to pick another partner to edit our stretched sentence.